tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post8475981951060142682..comments2023-06-15T07:22:17.787-07:00Comments on Michelle Krys: Query Letter Critique: Round Something or OtherMichelle Kryshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15435461016171266977noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-52946336101630557932012-03-29T03:51:36.741-07:002012-03-29T03:51:36.741-07:00Thanks SO MUCH JD! That's seriously nice of yo...Thanks SO MUCH JD! That's seriously nice of you to say, and I'm so glad you find the blog helpful :)Michelle Kryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15435461016171266977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-91836423961241356222012-03-29T03:49:45.265-07:002012-03-29T03:49:45.265-07:00Thanks, Amaleen!Thanks, Amaleen!Michelle Kryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15435461016171266977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-38213208306720214472012-03-28T22:05:48.076-07:002012-03-28T22:05:48.076-07:00Hi Michelle. This is a great post and very engagin...Hi Michelle. This is a great post and very engaging. You strike me as someone who learns from everything you do and experience and puts it all into practice (with a fair amount of funny giggles!) I like that a lot. I also love the part about the commas - that's really funny because it's true. On the whole, it's very informative and thought-provoking. Well done and I will be back for more ; ) J.D.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-26660700282332974512012-03-23T02:50:03.137-07:002012-03-23T02:50:03.137-07:00I love the premise of this query. Kyle sounds like...I love the premise of this query. Kyle sounds like an MC I'd be happy to spend some time with. Not only does he suffer the every day teen problems, but he's got some reality busting issues, too. The very best of luck with this query. Michelle's offered some stellar advice.Amaleen Isonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13686047513429707212noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-38701153199345294212012-03-22T22:34:26.123-07:002012-03-22T22:34:26.123-07:00Thanks! That's SO nice of you to say :)Thanks! That's SO nice of you to say :)Michelle Kryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15435461016171266977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-67853107137016988462012-03-22T20:54:33.204-07:002012-03-22T20:54:33.204-07:00I *always* love your critiques, Michelle. Great ba...I *always* love your critiques, Michelle. Great balance of advice and encouragement. So perfect!Katie Hathowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00328536245539353351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-89592319544161547162012-03-22T16:48:26.304-07:002012-03-22T16:48:26.304-07:00Good point, Brandy. Thanks for the input!Good point, Brandy. Thanks for the input!Michelle Kryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15435461016171266977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-75833241346860895552012-03-22T16:47:54.167-07:002012-03-22T16:47:54.167-07:00Isn't it great?
Feeling silly, but what is th...Isn't it great?<br /><br />Feeling silly, but what is the lucky seven? Whatever it is, thank you!Michelle Kryshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15435461016171266977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-6472045706025259822012-03-22T15:11:18.294-07:002012-03-22T15:11:18.294-07:00This book sounds awesome! I'd definitely read ...This book sounds awesome! I'd definitely read this.<br /><br />I agree with all of Michelle's comments. My only additional comment is that I have no idea what a syznygy is. I think most people probably don't (or I'm dumb-which is possible haha). Maybe you could drop a hint about what that is?<br /><br />Good luck with querying!Brandy Allardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16233316312236839306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3075536000183638139.post-91602533782140782462012-03-22T05:28:04.720-07:002012-03-22T05:28:04.720-07:00If I was an agent I'd totally ask for a partia...If I was an agent I'd totally ask for a partial of this - especially after your query-tweaking. Good job!<br /><br />Btw, tagged you in the lucky seven meme :)Amy (Limey YA Lit Girl)https://www.blogger.com/profile/01638503035429516747noreply@blogger.com